"Yunhi gar jal sakti ye zindagi ki kitaab to shaayad jal hi jaata har ehsaas , har lamha, parantu jo kitab mein likha hai kitab se kahin gehra dil pe likha hai to kyun jalate ho is qitaab ko jo sirf tumhein sambhaal ke rakhti hai aane waale kal ke liye"
Your writing style is ultimate, kahaan se paaya ye andaaz-e-bayaan
wo kal jo kabhi mera aaj hua karta tha, aaj us kitaab mein ek panna ban kar dafan hai.. jo kal tak mere hontho par hasi ban rehta tha, wo aaj aansu ban, kar raha mera daaman nam hai..
shayad in aansuo se hi dhul jaye us kitaab ka har ek shabd, is liye in aansuo ka ab na mujhe koi gam hai…
Rajat ji
har baar ki tarah is baar bhi aapki rachna ne dil ko chhoo liya hai.
In this materialistic and competitive world most of us have the same sort of feeling. beeti baato ko bhulane ke alawa koi chara nahi. aap ki tippani ke liye dhanyawad
"apni suhuliyat ke hisaab se apni pehchaan badaltaa hoon…."
ye ehsaas , ye jazbaat ek alag hi prativimb dikhaate haiN lekin jo bhi ho…. beeti baatoN se , guzri yaadoN se khud ko duur kr paana lgbhg na-mumkin hi hai… ek achhee rachnaa pr badhaaee —MUFLIS—
kitaab jlane se jajbaat nahi ita karte..ye wo panne hai jo kabhi nahi jala karte…..very very emotional poem..m touched..
"Yunhi gar jal sakti ye zindagi ki kitaab to shaayad jal hi jaata har ehsaas , har lamha, parantu jo kitab mein likha hai kitab se kahin gehra dil pe likha hai to kyun jalate ho is qitaab ko jo sirf tumhein sambhaal ke rakhti hai aane waale kal ke liye"
Your writing style is ultimate, kahaan se paaya ye andaaz-e-bayaan
रजत जी वकई जनमानस बहुत परेशान है व्यवस्था से क्या किया जाय. आपने अच्छी तरह अभिव्यक्त किया है.
main use bhula nahi paya aur Duniya usse anjaan hai ..
jazbaat mita pana itna asaan kahan hai …
Simple yet with very deep meanings !!!
wo kal jo kabhi mera aaj hua karta tha,
aaj us kitaab mein ek panna ban kar dafan hai..
jo kal tak mere hontho par hasi ban rehta tha,
wo aaj aansu ban, kar raha mera daaman nam hai..
shayad in aansuo se hi dhul jaye us kitaab ka har ek shabd, is liye in aansuo ka ab na mujhe koi gam hai…
Rajat ji
har baar ki tarah is baar bhi aapki rachna ne dil ko chhoo liya hai.
-Sheena
Hi Rajat,
Very very brilliant!
Amazing verbiage and fantastic meaning.
Touched the core of my heart.
It is great to come across such fabulous creations 🙂
Regards,
Dimple
http://poemshub.blogspot.com
Really touching!
चंद शेर आपके लिए भी. ( यादों का इंद्रजाल )
bahut hi badiyaa….shabdo kaa behtreen istemaal…shubkaamnayein aapko
सोचता हूँ जला दूं इस किताब को , तो शायद मिट जाएँ ये जज्बात …
जज्बातों को अगर यूँ मिटाया जा सकता तो जिन्दगी जीना कितना आसन होता ….
पुस्तकें तो माँ सरस्वती का वरदान हैं इसे जलाने की बात नहीं करते ….!!
भाई रचना तो मै पढ़ ही रहा हूँ लेकिन आपके ब्लॉग का नाम मुझे बहुत अच्छा लगा मेरा पसन्दीदा गीत है यह ..। -शरद कोकास ,दुर्ग
किताब के बहाने सुंदर रचना को पढने को मिली।
-Zakir Ali ‘Rajnish’
{ Secretary-TSALIIM & SBAI }
babhut hi umda….
behtarin rachna…
kitabein to sachhi dost hoti hai…
kuch kisse gahari chaap chod jatein hai.
In this materialistic and competitive world most of us have the same sort of feeling. beeti baato ko bhulane ke alawa koi chara nahi. aap ki tippani ke liye dhanyawad
Kitaabon ko jalane se kisse nahi mita karte…gar ye ho pata to hum har syaah kissa likh k jala diya karte…
"apni suhuliyat ke hisaab se apni pehchaan badaltaa hoon…."
ye ehsaas , ye jazbaat
ek alag hi prativimb dikhaate haiN
lekin jo bhi ho….
beeti baatoN se , guzri yaadoN se
khud ko duur kr paana lgbhg na-mumkin hi hai…
ek achhee rachnaa pr badhaaee
—MUFLIS—
BAHUT HI UMMDA RACHAN HAI AAPKI…
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